Subject: Business Analyst offer
Hi Rachel,
Thank you for offering me the Business Analyst position, and for the time you and the team spent with me through the process.
After careful thought I have decided not to accept the offer, as I have accepted a role that is a closer fit for where I want to take my career.
I enjoyed meeting you and learning about the team's plans for the new platform. I would be glad to stay in touch, and I hope our paths cross again.
Kind regards,
Sam Hollis